My response to the Magpie Tales 27 prompt. Link to the responses of others from here.
old connections rusted
tight against intrusion,
inseparable
like old friends
forged by history
Kalilily Time
Just an old lady talking to herself
My response to the Magpie Tales 27 prompt. Link to the responses of others from here.
old connections rusted
tight against intrusion,
inseparable
like old friends
forged by history
This I really liked!
Exactly so…
Excellent job with this magpie. Beautiful thoughts.
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I really like this, it makes me think of both chemistry and friendship.
Excellent – strong and wisely said…
I like this too.
Short and strong idea. Love it.
Really like the wisdom and care within your poem.
Elizabeth
I really liked this.
i liked this.. the way u related the rusted pipe to strong friendship.. its beautiful..!
…forged by history. I love this.
And what a lot of history this would have seen too. A little like my old outside tap which was stripped this year and replaced with new year. The memories it holds, not to mention the hand prints, will be priceless.
CJ xx
I love that you’ve put a positive spin on this that I wouldn’t have thought of despite the number of rusty things I’ve tried and failed to separate without drastic measures.
Very nice.
Just the way I feel about my oldest and dearest friends ………. nicely done!
Wonderful makes me want to call my best friend.
Old friends forged by history..love that!
loved the simplicity and strength –truly what friendship is about-c
we do seem to grow together! very nice mag!
some things are better
rusting tighty together
smiles.
nice mag!
I don’t know, I’m thinking about some rusted together pieces within myself – holding up as allies against change.
Always great to visit you.