Is what I wrote in yesterday’s post a poem? I’m still mulling that over.
In the same vein, here are two versions of one of my poems. Is one better than the other?
Verion 1.
Views
All kitchens should have windows,
double wide and Windexed clear —
if not into sunny vistas,
at least into frames of sky
beyond a stand of trees marked
by clumps of day lilies,
maybe a lilac bush or two —
certainly a bird feeder
filled with lilting movement,
stirring morning